February 5th, 2004

Another week, another fragment. This is almost becoming like a habit, isn’t it? Before I let you at the scene I just wanted to comment that I spent two or three days thinking about this scene before I wrote it, and I’m not sure if that is a good thing or not, because nothing came out the way I planned it. For one thing the scene is far shorter than I had intended, and I didn’t even get to the real action of the scene before it ground to a halt. It was kind of strange.

This week’s fragments (they’ll be italicized in the text) are :

• the moment when he
• back to the car
• nothing wrong with

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