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		By: Jeff VanderSquid		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Ask and Ye Shall Receive...&lt;br /&gt;
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Jeff&lt;br /&gt;
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On page 95 of the Tor first edition hardback, there&#039;s a paragraph that begins &#034;Back then, he was a mischievous sprout...&#034; Following? Good, well in that paragraph the line &#034;his bright green eyes sometimes seemed too large for his face&#034; appears twice. So, was it just a mistake? One of those human kinds of mistakes?&lt;br /&gt;
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***A mistake. There is so much layering in Shriek that a couple of those types of things got through. Especially because I was moving things around a lot even in the final edits, to get the &#034;mix&#034; right.&lt;br /&gt;
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My second question is about the machine in the underground sequence. See, I checked Secret Life out of the library, so I don&#039;t have it handy, but that sequence...seems repeated. Is it? Did you just rip it out of Secret Life and re-purpose it for Shriek: an afterword? &lt;br /&gt;
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***It was always from Shriek, but it took me many years to finish Shriek, so in the meantime, I took that piece out and used it in Secret Life as a complete story and as a fragment to presage Shriek in City of Saints. But it was always part of Shriek.]]></description>
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<p>Jeff</p>
<p>On page 95 of the Tor first edition hardback, there&#8217;s a paragraph that begins &quot;Back then, he was a mischievous sprout&#8230;&quot; Following? Good, well in that paragraph the line &quot;his bright green eyes sometimes seemed too large for his face&quot; appears twice. So, was it just a mistake? One of those human kinds of mistakes?</p>
<p>***A mistake. There is so much layering in Shriek that a couple of those types of things got through. Especially because I was moving things around a lot even in the final edits, to get the &quot;mix&quot; right.</p>
<p>My second question is about the machine in the underground sequence. See, I checked Secret Life out of the library, so I don&#8217;t have it handy, but that sequence&#8230;seems repeated. Is it? Did you just rip it out of Secret Life and re-purpose it for Shriek: an afterword? </p>
<p>***It was always from Shriek, but it took me many years to finish Shriek, so in the meantime, I took that piece out and used it in Secret Life as a complete story and as a fragment to presage Shriek in City of Saints. But it was always part of Shriek.</p>
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